I looked through your gallery before writing a critique, and I must say, you have some very strong work, but this one seems a little out of place.

The empty space behind her draws both my eye and my mind to it, trying to figure out if there was perhaps a conceptual reason that you included it.

If you had composed the void space out of the frame, we would see a little more of the model, and the way she 'sneaks' out of frame also leads the eye away from the focus of the image.

I gave high marks for vision, as I can see in the image what you were going for, but the empty space and composition draws the eye in too many different directions.

I do like the use of color, the styling and choice of wardrobe, and would love to see more from the series.

Your use of colors is very visually appealing. The greeny granite-ee wall's texture compliments the models skin tone very well. The overall temperture used is great! A good contrast between warm and cool.

Very beautiful model and stellar wardrobe. Props to hair and makeup.

The way you've framed the model leaves me wondering what she is sitting on. I'd almost prefer to see a little more of the photo.

The top photo, IMO, is much better than the bottom and should be on its own. They're both beautiful photos but there are two very distracting features about the bottom that I can't get past. One, is her pose. She seems very uncomfortable. And two, the paper in her hand, with the scribbles all over it makes the photo seem very staged. The scribbles are less noticeable in the top photo.

Overall, beautiful shots!