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i love love love this one, fullview!
model: lina :iconlinadomina: (VISIT HER!)
photo, stylign: me

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:iconbrunomaric:
I like the fact that you allow critiques on all your shots, or so I'm assuming it's all of them. This is nice but not really subtle - something I enjoy. I have two things I don't like right off the bat, though. First, I personally would not have cut out the foot. Secondly, the one had that's visible looks a bit awkward or stiff. Either way, I just feel like it should be posed otherwise and somehow more relaxed. Otherwise I can see this shot in a magazine. Very well done. The tones are awesome. Location seems rad.

Good work! :beer:
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Hi! :D I have to say this picture really caught my eye. I like the lighting as well as the choice of clothing. The model has the perfect expression and she is, of course, very beautiful. In fact I honestly have nothing to really critical to say about this. Except one thing;
The arm that is facing us seems a little...off. Just a little and of course that might just be a malfunction of sorts (bad uploading of the picture, something happening to the definition of it, I know desaturating an image on photoshop can cause it to look pixally) . I mostly notice it around the wrist area. If you look closely it appears to be a little choppy, but then again this might just be me.
Other than this (which might not even be a problem at all), I still say this is a beautiful picture, and I can't wait to check out the rest of your gallery.

*ps...this is my first critique. I hope I was somewhat helpful. I'm not very good at this :)
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Girl is absolutely wonder!
Coooool pic!

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10 favs in 4 minuten, so weit muss man erst mal kommen XD
zum bild, find ich ganz schön, allerdings würds mir ein tick besser gefallen wenn sie den linken arm nicht hinterm kopf gehabt hätte ^^

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arrrr was ne braut arrrrr

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danke für die kritik, vll. hab ich n paar wo der arm unten ist :) ich such ma

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she's beautiful.
i love everything about this shot.
:)
xxx.
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gorgeous!! :heart:

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Canon
Canon EOS 450D
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Apr 19, 2010, 1:50:03 PM

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